My View on Developing the Car IndustryWith the development of modern industry，more and more families are able to have their own But，seeing the problems like air pollution and the reduction of resources，some people appeal for the reduction of private Still，I think there is every reason for the even faster development of the car Thanks to the development of the car industry， we do not have to cram in the buses， but can enjoy free travel in own cars， we can go to more places in a leisure Transportation becomes comfortable and But there are those who worry that too many cars may cause more traffic problems， serious:air pollution and the exhaustion ofresources， While these problems may be true， they can be solved and some are being For example， we can invent cars that: can save fuel or use other types of energy so that cars can still ＇be used even though resources run To reduce pollution， people have manufactured many cars without We can relieve the traffic pressure by building more and more roads or-adopt computer-monitored automated For all the contemporary problems cars bring， no one can deny the convenience cars bring us and ignore the effort We make to solve these Therefore，the development of the car industry is necessary， and it should develop as quickly as
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