给你两篇，你认为哪篇好就用哪篇 My friend I have a Her name is GShe is 12 years She is a good She is EHer birthday is September She likes She thinks they are She can swim and play the Her favorite food is Her favorite subjects are PE and English Because they are 我有一个朋友。她的名字是Gina（吉娜）。她12岁。她是一个好女孩。她是英国人。她的生日是9月11日。他喜欢喜剧片。她认为它们很好玩。他会游泳和打鼓。她最喜欢的食物是汉堡包。他最喜爱的科目是体育和英语。因为它们有趣。 My friend I have a His name is Jim MHis first name is JHis family name is MHe ie 12 years He is English(Chinese)His birthday is May He likes playing computer And he likes He also likes He can play the His English is good(He is good at English)His favorite subjuct is His favorite star is J我有一个朋友。他的名字是Jim Miller（吉姆 米勒）。他的名字是Jim（吉姆）。他的姓是Miller（米勒）。他12岁。他是英国人（中国人）。他的生日是5月15日。他喜欢玩电脑游戏。并且他喜欢游泳。他也喜欢看书。他会弹吉他。他的英语很棒（他擅长英语）。他最喜爱的科目是数学。他最喜欢的明星是Jackson（杰克逊）。 有可能字母大小写写错了，请谅解
Last year， I joined the English C That is very helpful for It teach me how to learn English well and I can watch English movies in English C There has many books and newspaper for us to borrow and read in the spare We can also talk with foreign Last summer holiday， I visited England to talk with foreign students and learn from I am very happy to be a member of the English C
The world onlineThe Internet is the fast growing source of information There’s no doubt that the Internet has brought about great effects on our The fist is its value for people who are looking for When people are in need of information，the Internet is now the fist choice that many people turn The second is the possibility to bulid groups online and form friendships based on common interests，rather than appearance， age or However，ther are some negative effects as The main drawbacks are uncontrolled information and unhealthy changes in the way people spend their As far as I am concerned，I often search the internet for some important news Slowly，I get a better knowledge of the world around me which broadens my With all the negative effects，the Internet is still a positive tool that helps make our lives better，so long as we learn how to handle the problems it
有没有命题？您可以订一个话题吗？ 这是我写的一篇关于健康的 Now health is getting more and more important in our Students also need to be How can we keep healthy? First，you should sleep A student need to sleep 8 hours a Go to bed early and get up It's a good way to make you Second，food is also very important for A good eating habit can let you be You had better not eat junk Or you will be Maybe，you will have a At last，please be If you live a happy life，you will feel the world is so wonderful and In fact，there are mang ways to keep So act quickly before it's too late! 我是初二的学生，如果这个作文里有什么不懂的生词或者语法结构您可以问我。希望可以帮到您！
