我是同济大学的在校生，像英语这类的课程应该比较提高（当然，英语是我初高中时候最有把握的一门课，在高手如林的重点高中，英语卷面成绩第一总能帮我拉一拉总分），只要你真的花时间了，肯定可以较快提高，这一些心得体会我已经跟很多人分享过了（通过交谈、邮件、百度知道），所以我的学习经验真的是“复制复制再复制”如果你觉得靠谱的话就去试试吧，希望对你也有所帮助。我们今天就讲讲作文的写法【英语作文的考试重点】初高中的英语作文重在展现你自己的水平：语法，尽可能不出现语法错误。书写，书写尽量工整，这个一方面能够让老师看得舒服，另一方面也表明了你写作的思路流畅。从句、长句、优美的句子、高级词汇的灵活运用。【万金油句子举例】___has been brought into focus，and ____ always aroused the greatest Among the various reasons contributing to this phonomenon， ____ plays an important There is no complete agreement among people as to ____ Some people take it for granted that _____________ while others hold the opinion that ___________ Taking above metioned factors into consideration， I think ________In a whole， ___________【提高的方法】我高二的时候买了一本书《王长喜十句作文法》讲的是关于四六级考试的，应用优美的模板来写作的技巧（说实在的这个有点儿投机取巧，但是应对考试绰绰有余）。我分析了一下平时的考卷，发现作文的题材有六七成都和里面所介绍的五种相关，我就把他里面提供的相同题材的几个不同模板做了一下整理，每种题材整理出一个我自认为最完美的模板（模板中不乏显摆自己高超语法技巧的闪光点）然后每一次考试尽量套上一个适合的模板，结果是十有八九我的作文会成为范文之一。所以，建议你买一本类似于模板的书，这种书市面上现在很多的，不仅是王长喜的，其他的也有。你现在要万金油句子你也不一定会运用得很自然甚至巧妙，因此，整理出几套模板，然后就这几套模板好好看一些优秀的例文。相信不久你的作文水平会得到很大的提升真希望说了这么多对你有实质性的帮助，加油啊，期待你如愿以偿，加油！附：【英语作文八种常用句型】一) 原因 A number of factors are accountable for this A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem) The answer to this problem involves many The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact The factors that contribute to this situation The change in largely results from the fact We may blame ，but the real causes Part of the explanations for it is that One of the most common factors (causes ) is that Another contributing factor (cause ) is Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that 二) 比较 The advantage far outweigh the The advantages of A are much greater than those of B A may be preferable to B， but A suffers from the disadvantages It is reasonable to maintain that but it would be foolish to claim For all the disadvantages， it has its compensating Like anything else， it has its A and B has several points in A bears some resemblances to B However， the same is not applicable to B A and B differ in several Evidently， it has both negative and positive People used to think ， but things are different The same is true of B Wondering as A is ，it has its It is true that A ， but the chief faults (obvious defects )are 三) 批驳1)It is true that ， but one vital point is being left 2) There is a grain of truth in these statements， but they ignore a more important 3) Some people say ， but it does not hold 4) Many of us have been under the illusion 5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement 6) It makes no sense to argue for 7) Too much stress placed on may lead to 8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that 9) Contrary to what is widely accepted， I maintain that 四) 后果 It may give rise to a host of The immediate result it produces is It will exercise a profound influence Its consequence can be so great 五) 举例 1) A good case in point is 2) As an illustration， we may take 3) Such examples might be given 4) is often cited as an 六) 证明1) No one can deny the fact that 2) The idea is hardly supported by 3) Unfortunately， none of the available data shows 4) Recent studies indicate that 5) There is sufficient evidence to show that 6) According to statistics proved by ， it can be seen that 七) 开篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of 2) Recently the problem has been brought into 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over 6) Never in our history has the idea that been so 7) Faced with ， quite a few people argue that 8) According to a recent survey， 9) With the rapid development of ， 八) 结尾 1) From what has been discussed above， we can draw the conclusion that 2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop 3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to 4) In conclusion， it is imperative that 5) There is no easy method， but ight be of some 6) To solve the above-mentioned problem， we must 7) In summary， if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue， more problems will crop 8) With the efforts of all parts concerned， the problem will be solved 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to 10) Taking all these into account， we 11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative， one thing is certain/
与其他文体相比，英治议论文的结构一般较为固定，有下列几个部分组成提出需要议论的议题；摆出正反两方面的观点；表明作者持何种态度；论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者接受自己的观点；小结。在具体写作中要注意下列几点议题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水，啰啰唆唆正反两方面的观点一般都要摆出，有时也有只强调一种观点的，那么这就等于将上述第二点和第三点合在一起了作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可论证自己的观点是议论文的最关键的部分。论证手段与英语说明文中的一些写作手法相同，常用的有罗列法、举例法、因果法、比较法等等。对于较长的英语议论文还可以在文章结尾时对全文要点作一小结。下面这篇学生作文是较为典型的一篇英语议论文Should Examination Be Abolished （取消）？The examination system has come to be the main theme （主题）of modern One should take an examination andsucceed in passing it before he could be admitted， promoted or As it plays so important a role in the realm of education （教育的领域） it is under much criticism （评论） as to its validity （有效性） People who are in favour of it try to develop this system more； those who are against it believe that such a system should be Should examination be abolished？ In my opinion it should Many people think that an examination is the only means to test knowledge， but， in fact， that is not A few questions given in an examination could by no means cover the whole field of the Thus those who are able to answer them may be the poorest of the students and yet happen to know just a few points about that I'd like to say that， because of the existence of the examination system， students pay so much attention to gaining high marks， that they often forget the chief purpose of The so-called clever students devote （贡献） themselves to the study of textbooks They， of course， know nothing but the skeleton （梗概） of The end and aim of education， however， is to enable students to learn how to To do this， students must get themselves to do all kinds of training， physicalas well as The present examination system has discouraged students from making such an Moreover， since the students try so hard to put their lessons into memory in as short a time as possible， psychologically （心理上来看）， they soon forget the whole subject as soon as the examination is Surely this is one of the greatest wastes ever made in the history of Lastly， in order to get high marks， there is a great temptation （诱惑） for students to cheat （作弊） in an Indeed， such a practice becomes the means to the They cheat their teachers， their parents and also Such a tendency would impair （损害） our moral standards （道德标准） Therefore， I am of the opinion， in conclusion， that the examination system should be
