下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1、适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened 2、善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3、一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 be interested in google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的词汇,表达"与…一致"的意思,替换 With … Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into Current ( currently )替换 now Appeal to 替换 be interested in Growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly Additionally,recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly 用了非常精彩的被动[摘 要]英语写作是一个复杂的思维过程,对认知能力、思维能力、语言能力、组织能力和自我监控能力都有相当高的要求。本文通过说明英语写作的重要性,分析写作的“四步法”即:“词——句——段——篇”。最后根据教学经验,提供多种写作训练的步骤与方式,学习和获取选词、造句、组段、谋篇的知识能力。 [关键词]大学英语 写作方法 训练方法 英语写作是一个复杂的思维过程,对认知能力、思维能力、语言能力、组织能力和自我监控能力都有相当高的要求。同时,也是学习英语的一种必要实践,是进行交流的重要手段。英语写作能帮助提高使用英语的准确性;能扩大使用语言的范围,促进语言灵活使用;能培养逻辑思维及分析问题的能力。尤其对英语学习过程中的阅读、听力、口语有促进作用。英语写作也因此而受到人们越来越多的重视。不论写哪一种作文,都必须首先选词(word),造句(sentence),然后组段(paragraph),成文(composition)。因此,应该学习和获取选词、造句、组段、谋篇的知识和能力。 一、选词 词是造句的原料,选词应注意以下几点。 1.分辨语体。英语的词有书面语体和口语体之分。 例如:laboratory-lab, mathematic-maths等,前者是书面语,后者是口语。写作文的时候,应该以用书面语为主,少用口语词。 2.明确词性。英语词有一词多性的现象,也有同一个词根派生出几个单词,例如,die(动词), death(名词),dead(形容词)都是“死亡”的意思,但它们词性不同,用法也不相同。 3.成语的运用。成语是长期以来惯用的固定词组,如She goes to school,“她去上学”,而“She goes to the school”则是她去学校(办事),后一句中多了一个定冠词,意思就大不一样。 4.识别词义。英语里面有许多同义词,还有一词多义的情况。例如,whether和if都有“是否”的意思。另外,If这个词既可以表示“是否”,也可以表示“如果”。 5.注意拼写。写作时,常会出现拼写错误,大小写和标点等问题。 二、造句 句子是表达意思的最小单位。造句应注意以下几点。 1.要写出正确的句子 (1)主谓齐全,牢记5种简单句的基本句型:①S+Vi, ②S+V+P ③S+Vt+P ④S+Vt+Oi+Od ⑤S+Vt+O+OC。 (2)词序恰当,英语的词序有些是有规则可循的。如:always,never,often,seldom,这些频度副词一般放在行为动词的前面,连系动词、助动词或情态动词的后面。 (3)关系一致。这里包括主谓关系的一致、代词指代关系的一致、句子前后时态关系的一致等等。 2.要写出优美的句子 好句子的标准如下。 (1)完整。完整是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句子表达单一的、完整的意思。它不包含并不紧密相关的意思,也不表达本身不完整的意思。 (2)连贯。连贯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。句子中的词语和部分应恰当地衔接,它们之间的关系应十分清楚。 (3)简洁。句中不应有任何不必要的词。只要意思充分地表达了,用词越少越好。用词过多只会使意思模糊不清,而不是更加明晰。 (4)强调。凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以强调。为此,说话时人们可用各种方法,如提高声音、放慢语速、使用短句或加上手势。写文章时,也可以使用倒装、感叹、重复、反问等方法对应该强调的词语和句子加重语气。 (5)多样。句型的多样化,对好的文章来说是必不可少的。短句和长句,简单句、并列句和复合句,圆周句和松散句都应错杂使用。也可用一个问句、祈使句或感叹句。但是不要只是为了多样化而频频变换句型。 三、组段 段落既是文章的组成部分,又是一个自成一体、相对独立的整体。它通常由主旨句、扩展句和结尾句组成。 主旨句。主旨句揭示该段内容的中心,放在段落的开头。从修辞上看,主旨句宜用比较简洁的句子,使读者易于领会该段的主旨。 扩展句。扩展句的内容必须围绕主旨句,支持主旨句。偏离主旨句的扩展句等于画蛇添足,应该删去。从修辞上看,几个扩展句如果能分别用简单句、并列句和复合句,则整个段落会显得生动一些,而不至于那么单调、呆板。 结尾句。结尾句是对主旨句的呼应,它通常导出扩展句所陈述的结果。 一个段落恰如一篇微型文章,它的内容应该完整、连贯并且展开得法。内容完整就要求段落中的各句都紧紧围绕同一个中心或主题。如有必要另辟主题则须重起一段。内容连贯,则要求文字条理清晰,层次结构清楚,句与句之间有内在的逻辑关系。另外,一个展开得法的段落应运用一种或几种恰当的展开方法。段落的展开方法有多种,如按时间展开、按过程展开、按空间展开、按举例法展开、按类比和对比法展开、按因果分析法展开、按分类法展开或几种方法相结合。 四、谋篇 一篇文章应有比较完整的内容和结构。它通常包含引言段、扩展段和结论段。开头的段落要引人入胜,要能够激起读者对本文内容的兴趣和好奇心,同时提供必要的背景知识。本论部分提出作者的观点和论据,叙述要清楚而合乎逻辑。结尾部分阐述论证的实质和重大意义,这部分常常以强劲有力的句子结束来加深读者的印象。常见的英语作文包括记叙文(Narration)、描写文(Description)、说明文(Exposition)议论文(Argumentation)和应用文(Practical Writing) 。 1.记叙文。记叙文一般是通过组图的形式来描述一件事情的经过。 描写文。一般是要求描写一个人物、地点或是指明线路等。 说明文。是用以解释说明观点,或说明用途、用法等。 议论文。是要求对某件事提出自己的观点和看法,并可以说服读者。 应用文。一般多为书信、日记、通知、便条、请柬、简历等。 英语写作能力并非是一蹴而就的。它必须由浅入深、由简到繁、由易到难、循序渐进、一环紧扣一环地进行训练。教师应注重抓基本功训练,严格要求学生正确、端正、熟练地书写字母、单词和句子,注意大小写和标点符号。按照“词——句——段——篇”式,鼓励和指导学生多读多练,坚持不懈,熟能生巧,以至达到“下笔如有神”的境界。
高中英语作文模板万能句型有如下:1、As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some 就我而言,在某种程度上我同意后者的观点。2、 As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/ 就我而言,我真的/完全支持这场测试/这个政策。3、 In conclusion/a word, I believe that… 总之,我相信 There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of…outweigh its 这两种观点都有一定的道理,但我认为……的缺点超过了它的优点。5、 In my opinion/view, we 在我看来,我们应该6、As for me, I… 至于我,我7、 As I see it, … 正如我看到的,
一、英语作文的框机架对比观点题型(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 有一些人认为……2.另一些人认为……3.我的看法……The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular There are two sides of opinions about Some people say A is their They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二) Moreover, ④---------------(理由三)While others think that B is a better choice in the following three Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一) Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二) Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三)From my point of view,I think ⑧----------------(我的观点) The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因) As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my For me, the former is surely a wise choice (2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一) For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处)In my opinion,I never think this reason can be the For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一) For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义) Indeed, we can learn many things form First of all,-----------------(理由一) For example, -------------------(举例说明) Secondly,----------------(理由二) Another case is that ---------------(举例说明) Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点) In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from 解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the For one thing,---------------(解决方法一) For another-------------(解决方法二) Finally, --------------(解决方法三)Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法) Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处)说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily Generally, its advantages can be seen as First ----------------(A的优点之一) Besides -------------------(A的优点之二)But every coin has two The negative aspects are also One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
随着经济的繁荣 with the booming of the 随着人民生活水平的显著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology 为我们日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that… 我同意前者(后者)观点 I give my vote to the former / latter 引起了广泛的公众关注 S has aroused wide public / Sth has drawn great public 不可否认 It is undeniable that… 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion / debate 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally, 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons 双方的论点 argument on both sides 发挥日益重要作用 play an increasingly important role in… 对…必不可少 be indispensable to … 正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes: 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive / negative effects on… 利远远大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the 导致,引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon 责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility / achievement 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 开阔眼界 widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills 经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into consideration 从另一个角度 from another perspective 做出共同努力 make joint efforts 对…有益 be beneficial to / be conducive to… 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for… 综合素质 comprehensive quality 致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to… 应当承认 Admittedly, 不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty 满足需求 satisfy / meet the needs 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词,字母I 大写) 方便快捷 convenient and efficient 在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life 环保的材料 environmentally friendly materials 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress 大大方便了人们的生活 Sth has greatly facilitated people's 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue 在一定程度上 to some extent 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of… 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly keen social competition 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest 长远利益 long-tem interest …有其自身的优缺点 … has its own merits and demerits / pros and cons 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of… …的健康发展 the healthy development of… 重视 attach great importance to… 社会地位 social status 把时间和精力放在…上 focus one's time and energy on… 扩大知识面 expand one's scope of knowledge 身心两方面 both physically and mentally 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to… 导致很多问题 give rise to / lead to / spell various problems 可以替代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief / view that 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress / burden 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to 与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with 可降解的/可分解的材料 degradable / decomposable material 代替 replace / substitute / take the place of 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities 反映了社会进步的 mirror the social progress/advance 增进相互了解 enhance / promote mutual understanding 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure 保障社会稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society 更多地强调 put more emphasis on… 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the social development 实现梦想 realize one's dream 主要理由列举如下 The main / leading reasons are listed as follows: 我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to
以下大家整理出来了高考英语作文中的万能句子。对考生会有很大帮助的。 Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注 The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as 互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题 Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了 It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为…… Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为…… With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为…… 引出不同观点: People's views on … vary from person to Some hold that … However, others believe that…人们对……的观点因人而异有些人认为……,然而其他人却认为…… People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解 Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异 There are different opinions among people as to …关于……,人们的观点大不相同 Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure) 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。 结尾 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…… Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…… Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that … 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…… There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点 All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would 总之,我们没有…是无法生活的但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题 提出建议: It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了 It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。 There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视 Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that … 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是… Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能…… It must be realized that …我们必须意识到…… 预示后果: Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in 很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险 No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that … 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…… It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展 论证 From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理 I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点…… Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边 I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信…… In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do … 在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智 Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why … 给出原因: This phenomenon exists for a number of First, … Second, … Third, … 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的首先,……;第二,,……;第三,…… Why did …? For one thing …,for another … Perhaps the primary reason is… 为什么会……?一个原因是……,令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是…… I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as 我十分赞同这一论述,即……,其主要原因如下: 列出解决办法: Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议 The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…… People have figured out many ways to solve this 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题 批判错误观点和做法: As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言,…… It was obvious that …很显然,… It may be true that …, but it doesn't mean that … 可能……是对的,但这并不意味着…… It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn't ignore that … 认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视…… There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明…… 如何连接 强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, 比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, 对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in