1、直接性建议：Let's+do sth咱们做某事吧。例如：Let' go 咱们去游泳吧。（go+doing是固定搭配，此处的go swimming“去游泳”，常用的还有go shopping“去购物”。遵循Let's+do sth的原则，句子中的动词原形是‘go’，切记不要改变动词原形的形式。）2、委婉性建议：Shall we+do +sth?我们做某事好吗？/Would you mind+(not) doing sth?你介意（不）做某事吗？例如：Shall we go shopping now?我们现在去购物好吗？（Shall用于第一人称，此处的第一人称是‘we’，go+doing是固定搭配，此句的动词原形是go，表示建议一起去购物。）3、征求性建议：How/What about doing sth?做某事怎么样？例如：How about playing basketball?打篮球怎么样？（about为介词，也是句子的固定搭配，所以其后要用动词的ing形式。How about=What about，在日常学习中如果遇到句型转换，这两个句型就可以转换了。）4、劝告性意见：You'd better(not) do 你最好（不要）做某事。例如：You'd better not swim 你现在最好不要游泳。（该句型的否定是把not放在do的前面。）5、责备性建议：Why don't you do sth?/Why not do sth?你为什么不做某事呢？例如：Why don't you ask your parents?=Why not ask your parents?你为什么不问你的父母呢？（这两个句子在文章中也是可以句型转换的，第一句借助了助动词do，第二句没有。）6、请求性建议：Would/Could you please (not) do sth?请你（不要）做某事好吗？例如：Would you please wait for me？请你等等我好吗？（其否定句是将not放在动词原形wait的前面‘Would you please not wait for me？请你不要等我了好吗？’。Would表示“将要”的委婉语气，could表示“能够”的委婉语气。两者并不是完全意义上的句型转换。）
It the widely using of robots will bring our human beings danger，【这句话不对，是想用it引导主语么？是要做陈述还是提出疑问？有三种表达，(⊙o⊙)哦，根据后面的意思，(我觉得你是想说：机器人的广泛应用会给人类带来危险么？因为使用了will)就是第三种】：It is the widely use of robots that bring our human beings (It is 强调) Is it the widely use of robots bring our human beings danger ？ Is the widely use of robots will bring our human beings danger? 【用use就行，use有名词的意思】use your own view and thoughts on it【on it 可以删掉】The issue of whether or not widely using of robots has a positive influence to society has been hotly disputed in public【whether的用法不对（建议专门看下语法书讲whether的），应该这样说：whether the widely use of robots has a positive infuence on society（have an influence on 是固定搭配，不用to）】bring plenty of benefit for society【(给/为带来)】present my own view about this 【view on sth 】The advocates of widely using of robots hold a strange belief 【of bots删掉，支持者就可以了，读者可以看懂】some danger works， 【dangerous 是形容词，danger是名词，work不可数名词：some dangerous work】which strengthen the security rate【strengthen的意思是加强，而这里说的是安全率，应该用提高：increase，或是说ensure the safety of 】Hence， it can be concluded that robots provide a lot of advantages for the 【这句话表明，The advocates 的观点是正确的，本段开头就不应该用strange来评价他们的观点 ，另外我觉得可以改成：we can get the conclude it can be 用的有点频繁了，多变换句式增强文章的可读性。】negative effects for society【effects on sth 固定搭配】The reason is that some manual workers【用because就可以了，这个这个，感觉你的文章。。有点僵硬，模式化了，哎，写出漂亮文章的确很难啊，我也探索与君共勉！】The fact that handcraft is one of the traditional culture， which can represent the history of country， has been underestimated in 【我的修改是，the fact that handcraft，as one form of expression of the traditional culture，represents the history of a country，has been underestimated by 】its still make a lot of demerits， which may lead our life become more detrimental【it still 我的修改：which may threat the healthy development of our 】一些词:widely ，lead，suppose，view，demerit……还有一些句式 xxx is that xxx ，the fact that ……频繁出现，就是那种这句出现了，下句马上又出现了的，这种不好，不是说不能用个第二次。还有就是介词的使用，固定搭配什么的，应该加强一下。有不对的地方，楼主指出来啊~~~
