A month ago，it happened in a morning，I can't forget till === Although it has been one month since it happened， I still couldn't forget That morning，I slept too late， and I was so afraid to be That made me not have a good I ate breakfast quickly，during that time，my grandmother talked to me ceaselessly，and told me to take care safety，again and again，so I got ====I overslept that morning so I was in such a bad mood worrying that I would be late for I would like to finish my breakfast quickly while my grandma was nagging all the time， saying i should be careful on the road again and "You really are a pain!"I said，then，she didn't say ========"You are really annoying!" I Then she just stopped Till now I still rememberthat thing，how my grandmother loves me!The unforgettable thing made me very ========Till now I still think of Grandma loves me! How could I ever say that to her?The unforgettable thing made me very
We all know that English is very important and useful in our daily life So we should work hard to learn it I am also learning English ，and I find that I can remember new words quickly and learn These are my But I also learn that I will forget them easily and Ican not learn grammer very For these disadvantages， I will do more exercise to improve my EI beleive I can do it
语法没有大问题主要问题： 汉化痕迹明显，初一到初三水平。 过渡连贯不够。纠错：I still can't forget what happened to me one morning last month That morning， I slept too late， as I was so afraid to be So I worried me a lot， and made me have a bad When I was eating my breakfast quickly，my grandmother told me again and again， asking me to take care (of myself on my way to school)， so I got "You really are a pain!"I However， she didn't say anything Till now I still remember that thing， and I regret that I should be rude to my How my grandmother loves me!
