initially，first of all，firstly，等替换firstsecondly，after that，then，beside等替换secondfinally，thirdly，lastly，at last，moreover等替换third祝你好运。这种替换的词介意你看慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作的书。词汇很多。但是千万不要模仿模板。
可替换成: be able to (do )， be capable of (doing ) 如: Most children are able to walk before they are able to = Most children can walk before they can 多数孩子在会说话前就会走路 He is capable of running a mile in four =He can run a mile in four 他能用四分钟跑一英里
雅思大作文结尾的高分模板的思路即将回顾全文部分省略，直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子： It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop But attempts should be made to redress the 关于人才流失的话题，作者在结尾一上来就表达了自己的立场，即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改变这个状况做了期待。我们来对比另外一个例子： All in all， the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money Nations need to work together on long-term projects， sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their 在分析解决型题材的结尾中我们也可以采用这种2要素的结尾方式，如果最后所剩时间不是很充分的前提下，省略对全文的回顾而直接表达观点也是一种明智的决定。 To conclude， it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased， they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others， particularly the family， above financial ambition or 新航道雅思：
