本人还很擅长写议论文，记叙文一般般。对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!In my opinion，the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。
我背过。不过我嫌这35句杂乱无章，就重新编排了下，编成了3段易记的短文。各位如有更好的编排方法，请回贴。以下是我编排的：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our On no account can we ignore the value of There is no one but longs to go to Nothing is more important than to receive Since I went to senior high school， I have worked very The harder you work， the more progress you The more books we read， the more learned we Since the examination is around the corner， I am compelled to give up doing So precious is time that we can't afford to waste There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be We should bring home to people the value of working We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever M Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever Thanks to his encouragement， I finally realized my It pays to help What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too Smoking has a great influence on our Reading does good to our mind and Overwork does harm to Listening to music enable us to feel Summer is sultry， That is the reason why I don't like We should get into the habit of keeping good Taking exercise is closely related to By taking exercise， we can always stay Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to Pollution poses a great threat to our It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air(supply fresh air for us)An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any We should spare no effort to beautify our The condition of our traffic leaves much to be It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic Those who violate traffic regulations should be The progress of thee society is based on
英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧，两者缺一不可。正确无误的造句能力这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。还可说say some thing in a friendly 替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。扩词有：play footballplay foot ball in the play groundplay football in the play ground with my friendsplay football in the play ground with my friends after 对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。又如：a friendmy friendmy close friendmy close friend named M以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life 为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my 这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良习惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。在平时的学习中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如：尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了，他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although)你与其他同学不同，你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun)我有个建议，把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角，这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)在暴风雨中，我们最好不放风筝，因为它可能让我们触电。(because，get a electric shock)新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkupwith)这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)我们赢了这场比赛，他们看上去很失望。(win，look)我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会(look forward to)
