Should We Keep the Students in School All the Time?Hello，Wether we should keep the students in school all the time is a hot topic among educationists，teachers and Some teachers think that in order to let the students have more time for their lessons and develop their good behaviors，the schools are supposed to be sealed off，so the students can't go out and have to stay at But some teachers and the students hold a different They believe that would cause some The students will have no time for relax，doing something they like，and that would do harm to their health，as well as their To my mind，I don't think it's a good way to keep the students in school all day Students，like every one of us，need time and places for playing。Please do not keep the students in school all the time，for our students and education，
写作准备：1、熟悉写作要求。首先建议买本带讲解的真题作文集，浏览范文。熟悉常考话题、惯常写法、用词用句组段的特点。另外，结合官方评分标准，熟悉作文的各个得分档次，为以后自评自改作文做个铺垫。2、积累写作素材。准备个笔记本，通读细读范文来积累常用词汇及替换词、词伙、句型、语法、话题、观点、案例、甚至写作样本等素材。除过阅读真题作文集，还注意在平时的阅读和听力训练中收集话题写作相关素材。我个人喜欢的一档电台节目是中国国际广播电台（CRI）的“圆桌会议（Round Table）”，里面有当下非常接地气的话题讨论，比如拼车、快递、青少年犯罪等。另外，TED演讲里也有非常好的原创观点，话题涉及教育、文化、科技、社会等不同领域。看演讲不但可以开拓视野，锻炼思考能力，有兴趣的话也可以研究其演讲词的写作技巧，对写作能力的提高也大有裨益。3、打好写作基本功。英文底子不够扎实的同学可以从历年优秀范文中选取若干篇进行翻译-回译、背诵-默写等练习，在语法书、词典、写作老师的帮助下，锻炼遣词造句的能力。组词造句这一关过了之后，就可以研究写作技巧了。写作技巧包括如何开头、如何展开话题、如何结束作文、如何让文章更有说服力等方面。写作技巧可以参照作文书里的技巧介绍，也可以自己通过分析范文来研究总结。4、玩中写（可选）。应试作文写作模式比较单一，常常被同学戏谑为“八股文”，练习一段时间一般会产生厌倦感。这时候可以结合自己的兴趣，选择非常喜欢的看图说话类、故事类、时尚类、抒情类好句好文进行仿写、改写、续写、扩写、缩写、口头写等练习；也可以任意发挥进行自由写、创意写、记日记，这些看似“无用”的练习都可以提升写作兴趣和写作基础。综合使用各种练习方法，可以全面提升写作和口语表达水平。写作水平提高了，口语也无疑会有长足的进步。写作格式：1、审题：拿到题目后先读题，标出关键信息。这一步注意弄清题意，知道通过写作要解决什么问题。2、明确立场：作为当代大学生，需要以国际化的视野，科学、批判性地看待问题和分析问题。因此，注意我们的观点最好符合社会发展的大趋势，同时又能辩证地分析大趋势下的部分逆流并加以诊断性分析。3、头脑风暴收集素材、并简单分类：这一步把自己的话题观点、案例、相关词汇等列出来，备忘。基于读题信息和收集的素材，形成论点，根据题意选择适当的素材，形成一个两百多字能说清楚的论点。4、打好框架：一般来讲，250字儿的作文可以分为四至五段。第一段先给出论点，主体段结合审题阶段的观点类素材进行分类，草拟出每段的主题句（可以是短语），即分论点。然后把细节、事实、案例等素材与主题句对应，以便进行解释、举例、或补充。最后一段可以是对论点的情境化深入，也可以是分论点的整体性解析。5、修改：写完后，用官方评分标准来分析自己的作文，给自己评分。然后与范文对比优缺点，再修订或重写。经得起推敲的好文是一遍遍修改出来的。扩展资料：英语议论文的注意事项：要坚持积累和训练，要写就写得整齐。应试中短文写作部分通常叫essay writing，其实只是要求考生表达对某事的立场或观点加之简要的分析和解释而已，因此除非有明确要求，通常不需要写题目。因为在国外所谓有题目的essay要正式的多，通常为上千字到几千字，有些甚至包括文献综述及分析。如果要求写题目，那也是为了提醒考生在写作过程中时刻保持focus不至于跑题。作文题目一般有名字短语（如My View on Learning with APPs）、问句(如Is Learning with APPs a Good thing?)等形式。其实质上是对审题阶段所提问题discussion question的陈述或回答，而正文其实就是对问题的分析和解答。 如果正文不能回答题目中蕴含的问题，那就是“文不对题”了。
①Dear John Brown， How’s it going? I’m Zhang H I’m a student in N1 middle I have been studying English for 4 And I can talk to a native speaker in E In the school， I always talk to my classmates in E You know it’s good for my English Of course， I try to listen to the teacher After school， I often read some English magazines and Sometimes I learn some English It can improve my English Except this way ，I hope I can try another way to improve my E So I want to take part in the summer So I want to ask you some Could you tell me when the summer camp will start and where the summer camp hold? Then I want to know how much money I should pay for the summer camp? At last ，could you tell me some requirements? Good luck to Yours Zhang Hua②Everyone always has a good S On Sundays， everybody does some things what he Last Sunday， Jack had a relaxing S He got up 6 o’ After breakfast， Jack played basketball with his They were very Then he played the guitar in the And he sang songs very Though it’s very relaxing for him， it also make very noisy for Maybe he should turn down the At noon， jack fed his pet cat He is Jack’s Jack always play with him on the At night， he watched TV on the At the some time， he ate many delicious So he really had a great At the and of day， jack thought if I always have a relaxing Sunday like I will become the happiest boy all over the ③A Present For Mother’s Birthday Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is It is 25th May S Today is Han Mei’s mother’s So she wanted to give her mother a special What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers and a birthday card are the best A card is But it is bad for The more I buy cards， the more trees will be cut by So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this It was five o’ It was time to surprise her When Han Mei’s mother came home， Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her Then she cleaned her mother’s As you can see， her mother was very Why do you think it was a good present?④There are a great number of subjects in Different subjects teach students different They’re both very However， different students like different As for girls， most girls like art and C Maybe girls think these subjects are very interesting and very But most girls usually hate some subjects like math， chemistry or Girls have a really hard time with these subjects and they found out the worst report was from these subjects’ And what about boys? Of course， most boys’ heart are in math， chemistry and So boys always get good grades in these But most boys dislike Chinese or Perhaps they think Chinese and art are really Boys and girls both like E So English is the most popular subject in At last， what’s your favorite subject? You could write a letter to tell ⑤ People help with each other， it is the greatest thing in the We should give our love to people who need It was a nice A blind person Ben walked with a walking When he was walking down the street， a little boy tumbled because of banana Maybe there is something wrong with his So the little boy cried and sat on the Although Ben can’t see anything， he walked to the little Ben wanted to help the So Ben said，” Don’t Let me help ” The little boy was very Ben carried the little boy on the The little boy help Ben， So they were very If you see someone needs help， please help I’m sure you will be very ⑥Dear Friend Thank You For your Love Dear friend Lucy， thank you for your We get on well with each other in day-to-day As for my friend， you always help me with my When I have a few difficulties， you always encourage me to get over Do you remember? Last semester， I forgot to do my So the next day， I wanted to copy your Because I really didn’t want to be But you said you couldn’t lend your homework to me， it was very bad Even if I said I would never do it except this Please lent me your But you still said maybe it would start a bad I should do my own So I was pretty I said I wouldn’t become your friend A few days later， I thought I was So I told you to forgot this I wanted to make friends with And I was happy you said OK Now I ‘m certain you are my best Dear friend Lucy， thank you for your ⑦现代生活节奏The modern pace of life is just too Everyday as you open your eyes in the morning， you have to move fast or you won't get things done on You have no time to enjoy breakfast; you have to run in order to catch a bus; you have to shout and yell to get other people moved; you have to be nervous all day Since what time we human become such miserable creatures? It's because of money， which can buy almost every thing in the With such a powerful stimulus， we people act like drug addicts and become oblivious to the true meaning of ⑧可爱的小猫(A Lovely Cat) Several days ago， Mother brought home a little I gave her a nice name "Mimi" She is black all over except her: four feet and a small There is also a white bib on her Can you imagine what she looks like? Every morning she gets up the Then she always climbs up my bed and wakes me When we sit at table having our meal， she often runs under the table and even climbs onto our knees， it seems as if she was saying， "Let me join I want something to " “Mimi" likes to lie onthe floor in the She feels;comfortable that She looks more lovely when doing I like "Mimi" very much because the cat brings us a joy of the ⑨I Love Watching Cartoons Cartoon is my favorite Every day when I get home， the first thing I do is to open the TV and watch the Maybe someone would think that watching cartoons is a so naive thing， but I don't think Cartoons refer to many things， containing some profound thought， which often makes me think about it a To conclude， I love watching Cartoons give me happiness and cause me to think ⑩小时候(Youthful Times) Time flies when we are having fun is an old We know， as we reminisce of our past， time flies As we grow beyond our We remember the times of fun we had when we were young， when we were in primary We had little concern， little We all remember chasing our friends in catch， sneaking around in hide-and-seek and the fun in the As we grow with time， our lives become filled with stress and It is in these times we remember what we had， what we took for As we do so， we look forward to what we can achieve and what we will see of ourselves years down the
Yesterday was my birthday， so some of my classmates sent me Mother prepared a tea party for I invited all of them to come and take part in The tea party began at half past There were cold drinks and We ate， talked and We felt that we were the happiest men in the world 昨天是我生日，所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。。 I like the Chinese new year better than any other This is a time especially for rest and I need not I wear good clothes and eat good I have a good time from morning till I am as happy as a 我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时间。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服，吃好东西。我每天从早到晚日子过得轻松愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。 No sooner had the witer vacation begun than I returned to my native Of course I must make good use of it;In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the At night I watched television with my hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to 寒假刚一开始，我就回故乡了。自然我须好好利用它。 早晨我复习功课并阅读报纸或杂志。下午我和朋友打球，或去河中钓鱼。晚上我就和家人看看电视。墙上的钟刚敲十下，我就去睡觉了。 I live very happily today! In the morning， it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family， the air on the mountain is very fresh， the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely Coming back home in the evening， family and I sat and watched TV together， we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting， the whole family is happy and harmonious! 今天我过得非常开心！早上，天气非常好！于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融融！ my trip to japan (日本之旅） Japan was It was very cool and We flew kites in the I bought a watch I wanted to buy more， but I didn't have The gardens there were I very liked the gardens The japan department stores were too I couldn't find M The food was We ate a lot of fish。 I also liked the vegetables and cake I hope I can go to Japan one more 日本是一个非常有趣的国家在那里有凉爽的空气和很强的风。我在那里的公园玩风筝。那里的花园很美丽。我十分喜欢那花园。日本的百货商店很大间。我找不到妈妈食物是美味的。那里的食物很美味。我们在吃了很多的鱼。我也爱吃那里的蛋糕和蔬菜。我希望下次可以再到日本去。 我的家乡（my hometown ） I hometown is at ShenZi born at My hometown is a beautiful Everyday we can see the farmers wake up early go to farm working ， the bird is singing。Every everning i and my brother will playing the toy in front of my we can see my student cycle the bicycle go to school when school i like my hometown 我的家乡在四川。我在那里出身。我的家乡是一个很派哦量的地方。我们可以看到农夫们很早就起身到菜园里，小鸟们在歌唱。每个下午我和我弟弟会在我家面前玩玩具。我们可以看到学生们起着脚踏车上学去。我非常的喜欢我的家乡。 visiting the museum(参观博物馆） I bring Ann visit museum last Sunday she was surprised to see many old things ， and she was interested in the King’s hat She wanted to buy I told her it wasn ’t buy Ann kept asking me other When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top ， she stopped to point at in and asked me ， “ What is that ? ”“ It is a cup ” I told her We had a good time in the museum 上个星级日我带Ann 参观博物馆。她惊奇看见许多很老的古董，并且她对国王的帽子很感兴趣。她想要购买一个。我告诉她不能买的。Ann保持向我问其它的古董。当她看见一件东西有三条腿和一奇怪的顶端时，她停下来在问我，“那时什么？”我告诉他那是杯子。 我们在博物馆中度过快乐的时光 满意采纳哦谢谢
一、引出开头1：It is well-known to us that……（我们都知道……）==As far as my knowledge is concerned， …（ 就我所知…）2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题引起了关注）3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to （现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题）4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as （互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题）5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……）6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……（人们一般认为……）7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎认为……）8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道）二、表达不同观点1：People's views on……vary from person to Some hold that……However， others believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……）2：People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to ==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异）4:There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相同）三、表示结尾1：In short， it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）2：From what has been mentioned above， we can come to the conclusion that……（从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……）3：Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……）4：Hence/Therefore， we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as （毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点）6：All in all， we cannot live without……，but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would （总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题）四、提出建议1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)（该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了）2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视）3：Obviously ，if we want to do something … it is essential that……（显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……）4：Only in this way can we ……（只有这样，我们才能……）5：Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）五、预示后果1：Obviously，if we don't control the problem， the chances are that……will lead us in （很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险）2：No doubt， unless we take effective measures， it is very likely that ……（毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……）3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation（很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展）六、表示论证1：From my point of view， it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the (在我看来，支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……（我无法完全同意这一观点）3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，……（就我来说……）4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句（我真诚地相信……）5：Finally， to speak frankly， there is also a more practical reason why ……（最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因……）七、给出原因1：The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （的原因是） 2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons First，……Second，……Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……3：For one thing，…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand，……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as 我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……2：As far as something is concerned，……就某事而言，……3;It is obvious that……很显然……4：It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的，但我们不应忽视……6：There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……九、表示好处和坏处1：It has the following 它有如下优势2：It is beneficial/harmful to ==It is of great benefit/harm to 它对我们有益处3:It has more disadvantages than 他有很多不足之处十、表示重要、方便、可能1：It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do 对于某人做……是……2：It plays an important role in our 十一、采取措施1：We should take some effective 我们应该采取有效措施2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the 我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难3：We should do our utmost in doing 我们应该尽力去做……4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced 我们应该解决我们面临的困难十二、显示变化1：Some changes have taken place in the past five 过去五年发生了很多变化2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international 在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%十三、表明事实现状1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……2：No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested 4:be closely related to ~~ （与息息相关） 十四、进行比较1：Compared with A，B……与A比较，B……2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV十五、常用英语谚语1：Actions speak louder than 事实胜于雄辩2：All is not gold that 发光的未必都是金子3：All roads lead to R条条大路通罗马4：A good beginning is half 良好的开端是成功的一半5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊6：A miss is as good as a 失之毫厘，差之千里7：Failure is the mother of 失败是成功之母8:Industry is the parent of 勤奋是成功之母9:It is never too old to 活到老，学到老10:Knowledge is 知识就是力量11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to 世上无难事，只怕有心人
