本人还很擅长写议论文，记叙文一般般。对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!In my opinion，the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。
Should We Keep the Students in School All the Time?Hello，Wether we should keep the students in school all the time is a hot topic among educationists，teachers and Some teachers think that in order to let the students have more time for their lessons and develop their good behaviors，the schools are supposed to be sealed off，so the students can't go out and have to stay at But some teachers and the students hold a different They believe that would cause some The students will have no time for relax，doing something they like，and that would do harm to their health，as well as their To my mind，I don't think it's a good way to keep the students in school all day Students，like every one of us，need time and places for playing。Please do not keep the students in school all the time，for our students and education，
其实企业形象，一定是对外人的展现，你的网站、小程序、公众号、宣传册、装修环境等等，这些都是可以对外展示的，当别人看到这些的时候觉得高大上，你的企业形象立马就起来了。这些都要花钱的，都不太简单，所以再加一条，你的职业程度或者你团队的职业程度。职业程度具体表现如下1、穿着及商务礼仪2、谈话的专业程度（一定要有话术，并不断修改）3、做事的专业程度这些会直接呈现给你的客户，我感觉这才是最重要的点，但是算是最不好提升的了。In fact， the corporate image must be displayed to the outside Your website， small programs， WeChat official account， brochures， decoration environment， can all be displayed to the outside When others see these things， they feel tall， and your corporate image immediately These all cost money， and they are not very simple， so add another one， your professional level or the professional level of your The specific performance of professional level is as follows: Dressing and business etiquette Professional level of conversation (must have speech skills and be constantly revised) Professional level of doing things will be presented directly to your I think this is the most important point， but it is the most difficult to
企业形象，一定是对外人的展现，你的网站、小程序、公众号、宣传册、装修环境等等，这些都是可以对外展示的，当别人看到这些的时候觉得高大上，你的企业形象立马就起来了。这些都要花钱的，都不太简单，所以再加一条，你的职业程度或者你团队的职业程度。职业程度具体表现如下1、穿着及商务礼仪2、谈话的专业程度（一定要有话术，并不断修改）3、做事的专业程度这些会直接呈现给你的客户，我感觉这才是最重要的点，但是算是最不好提升的了。In fact， the corporate image must be displayed to the outside Your website， small programs， WeChat official account， brochures， decoration environment， can all be displayed to the outside When others see these things， they feel tall， and your corporate image immediately These all cost money， and they are not very simple， so add another one， your professional level or the professional level of your The specific performance of professional level is as follows: Dressing and business etiquette Professional level of conversation (must have speech skills and be constantly revised) Professional level of doing things will be presented directly to your I think this is the most important point， but it is the most difficult to
我背过。不过我嫌这35句杂乱无章，就重新编排了下，编成了3段易记的短文。各位如有更好的编排方法，请回贴。以下是我编排的：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our On no account can we ignore the value of There is no one but longs to go to Nothing is more important than to receive Since I went to senior high school， I have worked very The harder you work， the more progress you The more books we read， the more learned we Since the examination is around the corner， I am compelled to give up doing So precious is time that we can't afford to waste There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be We should bring home to people the value of working We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever M Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever Thanks to his encouragement， I finally realized my It pays to help What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too Smoking has a great influence on our Reading does good to our mind and Overwork does harm to Listening to music enable us to feel Summer is sultry， That is the reason why I don't like We should get into the habit of keeping good Taking exercise is closely related to By taking exercise， we can always stay Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to Pollution poses a great threat to our It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air(supply fresh air for us)An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any We should spare no effort to beautify our The condition of our traffic leaves much to be It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic Those who violate traffic regulations should be The progress of thee society is based on
