首先，论文是正式的，应该用被动句式。 再次，用翻译软件翻译的答辩时是不好过关的。 下面是我自己翻译的，如果还满意就给分好吗？我翻了大半小时 The special economic zone is nearly simultaneously set up in Xiamen and Shenzhen，but the disparity of the economic aggregate became more and more obvious between them in the past 30 years of Is real the gap between the interurbans? Is this gap only on the total amount， or is per capita indicators also iexistent?What are the reasons for this gap?How could the city government office of Xiamen resolve this gap?The data of the important interrelatedly economic indicator which is derived from the period through 1997 to 2007 will be analysed， according to the aspect of the hen the reason is found out，and the future proposal of the development is tabled thesis contain four The relevant data is analysed in the first The interrelated index between Xiamen and Shenzhen is demonstrated and analysed in Part II and Part III，and the real gap between the citys and the causes are attempted at The logical suggestion and the improved opinion are raised based on the results of the Earlier analysis of the development of the Xiamen City in the last part
