1、用词不当。学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。 2、时态错误。一般作文使用的是现在时态，除了拿过去的事情举例子时，用过去时态。 3、句子中出现中国式的英语。 4、拼写错误。这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。 5、例子夸张。切记例证要符合实际，可以有些适当的夸张。 6、固定搭配用法错误 To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional To some extends应改为To some extent 7、成分多余 According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time 该句中的shows that是多余的成分。 8、词性混乱 However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and 句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
