英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。提高中考写作水平,需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧,两者缺一不可。正确无误的造句能力这得从初中一开始就抓起,首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积累,扩大视野,灵活运用。还可说say some thing in a friendly 替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。扩词有:play footballplay foot ball in the play groundplay football in the play ground with my friendsplay football in the play ground with my friends after 对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames,play the piano等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。又如:a friendmy friendmy close friendmy close friend named M以此类推,我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life 为了避免句型的重复,我们还可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容。如:The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my 这样训练写句的方法,可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。在平时的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对初中学生有一定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫。在《牛津》7B开始,我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景,设计了许多中译英,具体的范文模板链接:链接: _4QGLixF-sKPBY2PS7Og 提取码: nzpt
一、提纲类假设你是李华, 你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest), 你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:1、询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2、谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3、告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意: 词数:120—150; 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。解析:作文内容是写电子邮件, 突出了英语学习中语言运用和交际的目的。题目给出语言运用的情境, 还有写作的要点提示, 但注意了所给出的要点仅是文章应包括的内容, 而非具体的语言信息, 所以考生不能逐句翻译。作文为应用文体裁, 内容贴近中学生的日常生活和交际的需求, 因此学生写起来更会有素材, 形式上给出要点但又有相当的写作的自由度,给学生留下一定的想象和创造的空间。【参考范文】Dear Tom,It’s a month since you studied in B How is everything going with you? I am really happy to have such an unforgettable experience with you I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this I think the chance is of great importance for To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English I would appreciate it if you could offer me a I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English I can’t wait to see you again!Yours Sincerely,Li Hua二、图表类生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。注意1、对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2、词数120 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Conflicts with others are common in everyday 【思路点拨】(1)本题为半开放式作文,要求学生介绍事情经过、冲突原因以及避免冲突的做法。在写作中,学生首先应该注意时态的变化。在叙述事情的经过以及冲突原因时,时态应该以一般过去时为主,在谈及避免冲突的做法时应以一般现在时为主。(2)学生还应注意段落清晰,行文流畅。根据要点提示,作文最好分为三段,第一段介绍事情经过,第二段分析冲突原因,第三段谈论避免冲突的做法,提出建议。(3)内容要点:①碰撞(bump into) 争执(quarrel) ②关系紧张(tense relationship) 过错(fault) 该受到责备(be to blame) ③过分关注输赢(care too much about winning and losing) ④避免冲突(avoid conflicts) 设身处地为他人着想(put ourselves in others place )【参考范文】Conflicts with others are common in everyday During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean They cared too much about winning and As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others Don’t be self-centered and try to be We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and 三、演讲稿假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:1、目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;2、骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbon life);节能(energy saving)注意:1、词数:120词左右;2、演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.Thank you!【参考范文】Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle S The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles” As is known to us, air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of Therefore, it’s high time we chose another better means of transport, that is, There are many good reasons to ride First of all, compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you don’t have all the added costs of fuel, and What’s more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars, because they hardly make Cycling has become a new trend around the world, a good way of energy saving and low-carbon Last but not least, cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live By riding bicycles, you can cut down on your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other So I think, riding bicycles actually has great effects on Let’s ride bicycles from today on!Thank you!四、开放式英语中“ ” “thank you” “sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊,改善关系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量,因而被称为“magic words”。请以“Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇120词左右的英语作文。体裁不限(叙述文、 评论文、 说论文……)【参考范文】Having good manners is seen by many people as a sign of cultural understanding and good Polite words are one of the When meeting people, saying “Hello” or “How are you” and so on means you are very polite, which will make it easy for you to communicate with others, which is the result of magic power of polite Otherwise, other people will hate getting on with And your life will become Only by saying polite words can you get on well with In a word, it is polite words that will make your life become