高考英语满分作文-租房 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。 注意：1．词数：100左右： 2．参考词汇：房租—Tent() I’m very happy to receive your letter， and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese I have already found a fiat for It is on Fangcao Street， which is not far from Jianxin Chinese S Bus N11 can take you there， and it is one stop before the Chinese S The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms， one of which is bedroom， the other two are bathroom and There are a bed， a sofa， a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat， and the rent is 500 yuan per Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish， but I’ll try my best to meet your If it is not suitable enough， write to me and I will look for another better Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours， Li Hua 满分理由 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 译: 我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街，不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达，前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼，有3个房间，其中一个是卧室，其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床，一个沙发和一个办公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望，但我会尽我所能，满足您的需求。如果还不够，给我写信，我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。 希望你能很快来到这里！ 就到这里啦！ 此致， 李华Practice makes 熟能生巧。 God helps those who help 天助自助者。 Easier said than 说起来容易做起来难。 Where there is a will，there is a 有志者事竟成。 One false step will make a great 失之毫厘，谬之千里。 Slow and steady wins the 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。 A fall into the pit，a gain in your 吃一堑，长一智。 Experience is the mother of 实践出真知。 All work and no play makes jack a dull 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 Beauty without virtue is a rose without 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。 More hasty，less 欲速则不达。 Its never too old to 活到老，学到老。 All that glitters is not 闪光的未必都是金子。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single 千里之行始于足下。 Look before you 三思而后行。 Rome was not built in a 伟业非一日之功。 Great minds think 英雄所见略同。 well begun，half 好的开始等于成功的一半。 It is hard to please 众口难调。 Out of sight，out of 眼不见，心不念。 Facts speak plainer than 事实胜于雄辩。 Call back white and white 颠倒黑白。 First things 凡事有轻重缓急。 Ill news travels 坏事传千里。 A friend in need is a friend 患难见真情。 live not to eat，but eat to 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。 Action speaks louder than 行动胜过语言。 East or west，home is the 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。 Its not the gay coat that makes the 君子在德不在衣。 Beauty will buy no 漂亮不能当饭吃。 Like and like make good 趣味相投。 An idle youth，a needy 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 As the tree，so the 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。 To live is to learn，to 活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着
Passage 1(09�6�1福建)某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。 注意： 根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯； 词数：120左右 I Want to Smile【参考范文】I Want to SmileThere are many advantages of It can not only make us happy， but also please If we smile at life， life will smile on us in So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible， First， I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me They arrange almost everything for With their help， I have made great I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a Then my smile should go to myself， for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better In a word， let’s greet every day with a Tomorrow is another Passage 2(09�6�1江苏)鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……鼠标的便捷性 点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…… 编辑文本，搜索信息…… 收发邮件，选购商品…… 点播音乐，下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标…… （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）注意：1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．【参考范文】The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．For most people， it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse， let alone surf the I A well-chosen mouse is really handy， flexible and convenient in controlling the With the functions of inserting， deleting， moving and copying， it enables us to edit test， browse web page and download what we It can even bring us a flood of music， movies and PC Just imagine， all this can be done with a cute A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier， but it doesn’t always help in a positive Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and （153 words）Passage 3 (08�6�1湖南)请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：对该人物的简单介绍；喜欢该人物的理由；从该人物身上得到的启示。 Thomas Edison Helen Keller William Shakespeareinventor;creative;diligent;full of wisdom ordinary but great woman;disabled;optimistic;eager to learn writer;talented;imaginative;man of all ages“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent ” “if I had the power of sight for three ” “Life is a ”【参考范文】Sample 1:Thomas EdisonBorn in America， Thomas Edison was a great scientist and He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth In fact， he was a man full of I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the He had more than 1，000 In his lifetime， he was always eager to know how things worked， which helped him to earn the nickname“the Wizard of Melo Park”He was also so diligent that he worked day and And this explained why he had so many great What impresses me most is his famous saying，“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent ”Probably I cannot be an Edison myself， but I can be a hard-working From him， I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born， but what you are doing and how you do it in your Sample 2:Helen KellerEvery time I read“if I had the power of sight for three days”，I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller， an ordinary but great American I admire Helen because she is optimistic about She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence， and communication seemed only a dream for But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active Under the guidance of her teacher， M Sullivan， Helen learned to read and write and became a famous For a disabled person like her， this was really a wonder!Helen has set an excellent example to all of Her story tells us that we should value what we have， and try our best to overcome any difficulty in Sample 3:William ShakespeareDo you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare， my favorite English writer and the man of all ages!Shakespeare， a son from a poor family， a man of little education， wrote plays and poems that are read all over the I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!Since“Life is a stage”，we are actually all actors and On this stage， everyone has his own role to play， and I will try my best to play my role Passage 3(06�6�1江苏)根报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：Dos Don’ts1．待人礼貌友好 1．避免不得体的言行2．坚守岗位 2．不忘履行自己的职责3．介绍中国历史和文化 3．不损害祖国的形象如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么。（内容由考生自己拟定）注意：1．对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。2．词数120左右。短文中已写好的部分，不计入词数。3．参考词汇：形象—image Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic VolunteersIt is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing What should the volunteers do and what should they not do ? If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer， 【参考范文】Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic VolunteersIt is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?Firstly， they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world ， and avoid improper Secondly， they should stick to their posts ， offering good services ， satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty ， and never fail to do their Thirdly， they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better ， and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer， besides the I will work hard and creatively， but never be lazy I will follow the law and discipline， but never break them I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors ， and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great Passage 4(06�6�1湖北)受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学 调查对象：高中生 调查人数：1000 调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图） Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recent， society has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students【参考范文】Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school In this survey， one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news， stories， popular science articles and articles about learning The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning However， the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning Passage 5(06�6�1四川)假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。旅游资源 许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟（海子：清澈见底；色彩斑斓）都江堰水利工程（2，000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）相关信息 气候适宜；交通方便注意：词数100左右，信的格式及开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 省份-province 海子-lake 都江堰水利工程-Dujiangyan Irrigation ProjectDear Nick， I’m glad to hear that you′re coming to Sichuan in A Yours sincerely， Li Hua【参考范文】I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in A You’ve made the wise choice to travel Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest， such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation PJiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes， of which the water is clear and looks It can excite visitors’ Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation P It was built over 2，000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation Besides， the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more I’m sure you’ll have a good Ｉ’m looking forward to your Yours sincerely， Li Hua
应用文的关键在于要有正确的格式，常见的高考应用文一般是信件，也有通知，发言搞等。信件又分为感谢信，道歉信，投宿信，求知信等。掌握这些信件的格式很重要，同时记住一些固定的模式也可以锦上添花。常见句型有：1．I am grateful to you for… I take this opportunity to express to you deep appreciate for the kind assistance you rendered it was kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate more than I can Thank you from the bottom of my heart for… I am terribly sorry for what I have please forgive I must apologize to you… I regret to inform you that I am unable to do… please accept my apologies for… once I am pleased to invite you to attend… it’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to… It is with great pleasure that I invite you to…I am sure that you will enjoy yourself we are looking for forward to seeing you I hope that you won’t decline my I am writing to you to complain about…There are some problems with me… that I wish to bring to First， …In addition，…I can hardly put up with it any If it is not properly settled， I would…， or I would…I would like some detailed information on/ about……I shall be grateful if you could let me have details of …I wish to apply for the position of which you advertised in…I have learned from a friend of mine that your company is looking for…I am very interested in exploring a position as a …with your I graduated from…in…仔细读题，注意不同应用文的格式。Example10: 据报道，七岁女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Army收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美元的治疗款。 假如你是新化中学的学生李华，请你用英语给Army写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：自我介绍得知的情况表示鼓励打算为她做什么祝她早日康复注意：1．信的格式已为你写好。2．信中不得出现你的真实情况。3．词数100左右。4．请在答题卡上答。Dear Army， I am a student from Xinhua Middle S I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung At present， ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a That will offer you so much I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty， no matter how hard it You are sure to make I will try my best to ask all my friends， schoolmates and relatives to write letters to Which may help It will give more courage to live Yours， LiHuaExample11: 请你用英文写一篇日记，内容包括以下要点：1．晨起不适，头痛，发烧；体温高达39℃ ；2．估计病因：昨天上学时未带伞，回家路上淋了雨，可能因感冒引起发烧。3．服药，大量饮水，卧床休息，下午好转。要求： 日期及气候情况: 四月二十一日 星期五雨; 词数: 110左右April21 Friday Rainy I didn’t feel well when I got up this I had a headache， I took my temperature and Found it was 39℃ As a result， I couldn’t go to school and had to stay at It was very cold yesterday， and it was raining heavily At that time， I didn’t take my umbrella with me， so I was caught in the rain on my way I thought I must have got a bad So I took some medicine and drank lots of I stayed in bed the whole In the afternoon， I began to feel Example12:请根据下面内容给学生会写一个讲座通知，提前两天张贴到广告栏上 地点: 学校科学会堂 时间: 本周六下午2时开始，大约需两个小时 主讲人: 中山大学野生动物研究中心的教授王海波同志 演讲题目: 为何以及如何保护野生动物 讲座后自由发言 注意事项: 100词左右; 可适当增减细节以使文章连贯;参考词汇: 科学会堂 the Science Hall; 中山大学野生动物研究中心 the Research Center of Wild Animal of Zhongshan UniversityNOTICE There will be a talk on “Why and How to Protect Wild Animals” in the school Science Hall at two o’clock this Saturday The speaker is Professor Wang Haibo， who comes from the Research Center of Wild Animals of Zhongshan U It will last for about two After that， you are free to express your Everyone is expected to take part in the Remember to enter the hall at ten to two and make careful notes while you listen to the Thursday The Students UnionExample13:高三年级一班和二班之间将在5月4日举行一次有关环保问题的演讲比赛(an talk show on environment protection)， 为帮助同学做准备， 二班将邀请清华大学的李博士做相关内容的报告假如你是二班的班长，请你根据以下提示拟一份有关报告会的口头通知 报告内容: 近年北京的环保工作已取得进步 地点: 教学楼三楼会议厅 时间: 4月30日， 星期三， 下午两点 目的: 帮助大家收集信息， 为演讲做好准备 参加人员: 全班同学 其他安排: 会后讨论Boys and girls: May I have your attention please? As you know， our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May4th， and before that we will invite Dr Li from Qsinghua University to give us a talk on the improvement in environment protection in Beijing in recent The talk will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday， April 30th in the auditorium on the third floor of the teaching I’m sure we can get enough information from this talk and make good preparations for the coming talk After the talk， we will have a Everyone should be there on That’s Thank Example14:(2007江苏卷)2007年4月29日上午10点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部提倡： 每天锻炼一小时 健康生活五十年 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言搞，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意：（1） 发言搞应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。（2） 词数：120左右。发言搞的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。（3） 参考词汇：阳光体育活动 a national sports program; 教育部 the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon， everyone，Thank you Good afternoon， On the morning of April 29，2007， from 10:00 to 11:00， hundreds of students from primary ， middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day， in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole Personally， I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily Although we take an hour a day for It is well worth Taking exercise helps us build up body and keep a clear Therefore， we can work more Thank you!应用文常考的是书信、电子邮件、日记、通知等，其他应用文请同学们自己一下。 可以把我们写作时的要领编成顺口溜，请看：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏，写日记同汉语；书信、通知格式要牢记。看清图表细输理，写人记事按顺序；打草稿查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。
