Effects of Rural Workers With the rapid development of our country in recent years，the number of rural residents who pour into big cities to find jobs is increasing so as to meet the growing demand of labors in cities These rural "immigrants" find their jobs in various fields: they work on construction sites， serve in restaurants and hair saloons doing the lower-ranking They render cities a new source of labor force and poured cities with new This phenomenon has a great impact on cities and aroused public It seems hard to tell whether it is a blessing or a Some city dwellers don't welcome these rural They look down upon them and always find fault with It's undeniable that many problems emerged with their We can always find rural workers who sleep on the pavement， who are sloppily dressed in public places and who don't obey traffic Some of them don't have a sense of social order and act the way they Those who discriminate against rural workers complain that they deteriorate the image and status of big Some citizens also believe that they are the chief culprits of the rising crime It's inevitable that not every rural worker is competitive enough for a job and some may run the risk of violating laws to gain illegal However， in my humble opinion， the demerits of the ruralinvasion could not wipe out the merits that they have made great contributions to the progress of our We should not forget the arduous work they take on to make our city beautiful and We should not forget their devotion to the basic construction of our With heart and soul， they sacrifice their whole youth without any Thus， they cannot merely be evaluated by the demerits they Without these indus trious workers， skyscrapers could not have been erected; roads could not have been paved； bridges could not have been Therefore， I want to remind those who discriminate against rural workers， the prosperity of the cities owes a lot to them the constructors of our beautiful city and the builders of our prosper ous It is gratitude and respect we need to show these heroes， not China has a large population of 3 billion， of which 900 million live in rural Most of the rural residents are still struggling under the poverty The immigrants have heavy burdens to support their poor Working in cities is a good opportunity but also a great challenge for these The challenge not only lies in survival but also in the relationship with local Some city habitants disdain rural workers，while the rural workers also have a deep prejudice against Both sides need better understanding and more If there were no prejudice， there would be more understanding and respect and there would be no 简 评 城市的繁华聚焦了人们的目光，但这背后挥不去的是农民工带来的困扰。他们筑造了城市灿烂的今天，但却成了不被理解的“另类人群”，他们需要社会的理解，更渴望一份对他们的尊重。 “民工"是一个有争议的群体，如果直接阐明作者的立场，会显得不太具有说服力。但崔翱翔同学以一个场面描写，自然的引发讨论，不直陈自己立场，却能抓住读者的注意力，进而诱导读者去思考。第二段展示了一幅熟悉的民工场面，“We cart always find rural workers who sleep by the street，who are sloppily dressed lnpublic placesand who don~t obeytrafficlaws．”使人自然联想到那些对他们的责难。但第三段笔锋一转，亮出自己的观点：“Without these industrual workersskyscrapers cOuld not have beenerected；roads cOuld nOt have been built．”并进——步指出，“they are the exploit of Our beautiful city and the builder of our prosperous life．”在这两种相反的态度之间，我们需要反省，需要了解他们的处境和心理，这样才能真正地相互理解，达成更有效的沟通。Looking forward to the Future What will the future be 11 Now let's see the enduring promise of hope that lies in the There are likely to be numerous potential breakthroughs (突破) and achievements in science and Solutions to current social and economic problems will be In the field of industry， agriculture and service industry， possible products and manufacturing (制造) methods might be Hi-tech industry could develop The future generation will have the opportunities to create the kind of life， to have the kind of freedom， that all previous generations only dreamed The living environment will be cleaner and People will lead a carefree Higher education will be available to every knowledge-thirsty It is hard to detail visions on people's beautiful Future is indeed like a riddle， some areas of which are beyond the reach of our Nevertheless， one thing is certain: the advancement of science and technology will characterize the Only through mastering advanced science and technology can a nation be successful in facing more challenges of technological revolution and social 核心剖析 提纲与文章内容一致、上千连贯，在三个充分展开的段落里用细节、说明来支撑主题。提纲帮助作者组织思路，使文章层次清楚、条理分明，合乎逻辑地概括了所有的重点，避免了思维不清晰、逻辑不通顺
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