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浪费很高兴为您服务,请问您是初中生还是高中生啊?
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高中生
老师,希望您尽快帮助我完成作文谢谢
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1个小时之内可以吗?
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Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in Some classmates agreed with the opinion of keeping pets at home in cities because different kinds of pets puts more excitement into our Not only can people live in harmony with animals, but also pets are great comfort to many lonely elderly Others opposed to this view because keeping pets at home in cities will cause city environment pollution and make noisy even to hurt people which will cause public panic and In my humble opinion,animals are peoples` best They ing a lot of happiness to people,staying every day with your But people are ought to manage their pets to prevent emergencies and government should ing in new laws to help citizen to manage their pets well
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这篇文章定义取舍不清,理由太短了[捂脸]能换一篇吗?需要那种观点明确,理由充分的文章
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您可以进行适当修改哦
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篇幅过短了,修改需要大量增添,就跟我自己写的没什么区别了[微笑]
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recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comforts from besides , getting along well with animals will make our life on the contrary the other students are against the in their opinion if too many people keep pets at home, it's bad for the what is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack i like animals, so i don't think it's bad to keep pets at but we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment
Talking about the pet animals,most people will think it is a popular topic,for more and more people raise pets in the Surely enough,animals are our human friends and they can bring people much happiness and With the comfort from pet animals,young kids can learn how to love and the old will not feel Some people even regard the pet animals as their family We should say that pet animals play an important part in the human life,especially in the city life where there are always crowds,traffics and Meanwhile,we have to say that pet animals have brought us new problems, such as ,trashes,noise , the uncontroled birth of the animals and the homeless Therefore,we have to spend much more time and money to solve these Generally speaking,we are able to solve the problems that the pet animals have brought us so that we can create a peaceful and friendly world for our human beings and the pet animals as
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My View on Keeping PetsNowadays, many families have a dog or a cat as a Some people think that pets are good and helpful Some of them even go so far as saying that animals are as good as humans, and their rights should be respected Senior citizens are especially fond of keeping pet because they are always feeling lonely at home and they see the cats or dogs as their 现如今,很多家庭都养有宠物狗或宠物猫。有的人认为宠物是很好的伙伴,甚至有人说动物和人类一样,也需要被尊重。老人特别喜欢养宠物,因为他们待在家里,比较容易感觉到寂寞,他们把宠物当做自己的伙伴。 But some other people do not like They say that animals are noisy, dirty and They think laws should be made to forbid people from keeping pets in cities and 但有的人却不喜欢宠物,他们认为动物吵闹、肮脏并且危险,提议制定相关禁止在城镇养宠物的法律。
Advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets 在西方,很多家庭养了宠物。花在养宠物身上的食物和医疗费用十分惊人。实际上,养宠物得从两个方面来分析,既有他的好处也有他的坏处。In the West, many families like to keep a We may be surprised at the amount of money they pay in terms of pets’ food or medical treatment, Keeping a pet, indeed, has many I have two main reasons for my First of all, pets can be good companions, which is especially important for those who live alone and the old who can not get out What they get from the pets is not only hours of amusement but also Some pets can even protect the house from Secondly, taking care of a pet also helps children to be responsible and caring members of the A child who learns to be very sensitive to the feelings of a pet can be expected to have positive attitudes to other people and However, some others would argue that pets are dirty or But I believe it is not that pets themselves are to blame, but their If the owners train their pets properly and take very good care of them, they are unlikely to get dirty or become To sump up, there are surely more advantages than disadvantages to keeping a pet, especially for those lonely and Money spent on the special food for pets or the high fees paid for pets’ medical treatment is not a 我为我的论点有两个主要原因。首先,宠物可以成为很好的伙伴,这是谁,尤其是对那些独居老人和谁不能走出了许多重要的。他们希望得到的宠物不仅小时的娱乐,而且忠诚度。有些宠物甚至可以防止小偷的房子。其次,考虑到宠物的关注,也是帮助孩子成为负责任和相互关怀的社会成员。谁的孩子学习是非常敏感的一个宠物的情绪是可以预期有其他人,而积极的人生态度。然而,有些人会说,宠物是肮脏或危险。但我相信这不是要责怪自己的宠物,但它们的主人。如果业主培养他们的宠物,并采取适当很好的照顾他们,他们是不可能得到脏或变得咄咄逼人。为了水池起来有一定的好处没有坏处,特别是保持一个宠物,这些孤独和年轻。花费在宠物或支付的费用特别高的食物