My interest [with] in computers began with video games I used to play [at] in a local shopping My parents disliked these games， and perhaps this dislike explains why they [refuse] refused to take computers Personal computers that operate as word processors and do other jobs [look]删掉 to them like mechanical [The] 增加 Same do the pocket calculators my friends and I use to do A word processor I used in my senior year to write papers for English may explain this A word processor is a small computer program to work like a The keyboard is similar to a The major difference is that in a processor “function keys” do [many] much more Specifically， the typed words appear on the “monitor” or screen above the keyboard， and since you “edit” these words on the screen， the processor has extra keys that erase words or whole lines or move it to other places in the paragraph or The other convenience is that corrected pages don’t have to be The processor has an attached printer and [press]删掉 a button transfers the text on the screen to “hard copy” – computer jargon for typed copy produced by the Processors thus make the job of writing look One of my teachers [is] 增加 objected that a paper I wrote on a processor looked as if a bank statement; he was [objecting] objected to the broken letters that a cheap “dot-matrix” printer like mine He didn’t want to tell me his real objection – that writing a paper should not be He obviously assumed that the processor and printer made the writing easy by doing the But the printer doesn’t write the paper， it just reproduces what I write with the The real work is in writing the paper and editing the words on the In fact， the ease of making corrections with a processor [give] gives me greater control over my I didn’t use to proofread a paper to avoid having to edit a page or retype The processor encourages me to look for
呵呵，中国式英文。好样的，你我有缘，我帮你改改吧。 As that betraying in the chart above vividly， the numbers of MS/MA candiate in the year 2003 was 750 And then the numbers were reached in 950 thousand in 2004 and were rocked to 3 millions in However， people might wonder what that behind the figure The reansons for the increasing which is pretty revealed in the chart above， it can be illustrated as At the beginning of this， the college expansion's result is that there are a huge numbers of college graduation， but the opportunities on career were as many as before， so there are many graduates take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate school to evade the fierce Moreover， we are under the age of economic knowledge that we must have enough knowledge to survive Knowledge was become a life-long Therefore， there are more and more people unquality for their 4 years college degree and some might want to apply for MA/MSIn conclusion ， I urge I mention all in above that there are the great increasing of MA/MS 兄弟，你这个论文，短文吧，我才疏学浅，学艺不精哈，你这知识性的社会经济形态让学子们很难接受。因为社会现在变了，学子们跟不上。需要吸取更多的知识才能丰富自己。 奉献你一句，你这论点还可以，不过语法没改之前，老外可能看不懂吧，就这样，祝你好运吧。
