这是一篇关于是否应废除死刑的英语论文，我写的是应该废除，不管观点同意与否，帮我修改一下文章的错误，谢谢！ 修改的简单一点，容易上台讲时下面同学容易懂。 It is 有容易犯错误的意思吗？ 关于死刑易造成不可挽回的错误，怎么翻译的容易一点 Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s It is a euphemism for legally killing No matter what methods are carried out， it is cruel and 这段话有错误吗？能否改的容易一点？ In 1983 John Evans was given three charges of electrocution over a period of fourteen After the first and second charges， M Evans was still conscious and smoke was coming from all over his body as a result of his flesh An official there even tried to stop the execution or account of it being cruel and unusual punishment， but was 这是我引用资料上的一段原文，生词稍微有点多，可否修改一下，改容易一点，如果全部抄录的话就有抄袭的嫌疑了。 No one should withstand the cruel capital 语法正确吗？ A prisoner discovered to be blameless can be freed， but neither release nor compensation is possible for a dead 改简单点 Those in support of capital punishment said if capital punishment was abolished， the murder rate would 这句语法正确吗？ “毫无疑问这种看法是错误的” 怎么翻译？ It is reasonable to believe that capital punishment will be finally 语法正确吗? 麻烦你了，先谢谢！重赏之下，必有勇夫。 （1）It is irrevocable，没有容易犯错误的意思，是不可以撤销的意思。 还有要看你怎么用，这it是什么？ The death sentence is irrevocable。 [死刑是不可撤销的。] 这未必，虽然判决已定，但还有可能去找国家领导人特赦，换成终生囚禁，无期徒刑。当然，法制用语是这么表达的。 再探讨irrevocable另一种用法。 The result of death sentence is irrevocable。 [死刑的结果是不可改回。] 因该是指执行后，人死已矣，实事无法改变。 （2）Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s It is a euphemism for legally killing No matter what methods are carried out， it is cruel and 这里，euphemism用错了。euphemism是委婉说法、婉言、 雅语。杀头还需用委婉说法吗？要用euphemism，可说成： Capital punishment is a euphemistic phrase for killing This punishment is more than a simple How can a person live after this punishment? 「Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s 」已经足够了。 The phrase， capital punishment， is a euphemism phrase for killing No matter what methods are carried out， killing a person is cruel and 如用“the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s life”要改成 “a cruel and inhumane way of taking human life”/“a cruel and inhumane way of ending a person's life”/ “a cruel and inhumane way of killing a person”。 （3）In 1983 John Evans was given three charges of electrocution over a period of fourteen After the first and second charges， M Evans was still conscious and smoke was coming from all over his body as a result of his flesh An official there even tried to stop the execution or account of it being cruel and unusual punishment， but was 其实，原文读起来没什么不好，只不过用于演讲要拖长一点，让听者有所感受。我不知道你的听众是否对此事已知晓，如果他们没听过此事，你还需要冗长地讲一讲。 例如，这样说说： For instance， in 1983， there was this person named John Evans who was sentenced to death for an unintentional manslaughter case in XXX In the instance of conducting the capital punishment， Evans was given three charges of electrocution over a period of fourteen After the first and second charges， Evans was still conscious and smoke was coming from all over his body as a result of his flesh An official there even tried to stop the execution or account of it being cruel and unusual punishment， but was [Short Pause] Wasn't that an inhumane way of ending someone's life? （4）No one should withstand the cruel capital 语法是可以的，但是表达的意思含糊。或者可改成： No one could ever bear to see the cruelty of capital (不知道你要表达什么。。） （5）A prisoner discovered to be blameless can be freed， but neither release nor compensation is possible for a dead 我相信你想表达死刑是不可挽回，人死不可复生。 A jailed person serving his sentence can be relieved of his sentence and regain freedom， if his appeal against his jail sentence finds him non- However， a dead person's life can never be （6）Those in support of capital punishment said if capital punishment was abolished， the murder rate would 语法修改： Those in support of capital punishment say if capital punishment is to be abolished， the murder rate will (有多种修饰方法，看你要如何凸显你的意思。） 拉长一点讲，可以改成 Those in support of capital punishment will argue that abolishment of capital punishment will not discourage but encourage those who will commit or are in the process of committing serious crimes to commit As a result， the murder rate will (建议而已，还要斟酌、斟酌。） （7）“毫无疑问这种看法是错误的”译作： This kind of view is definitely and undoubtedly （8）It is reasonable to believe that capital punishment will be finally 语法修正：It is reasonable to believe that capital punishment will finally be finally可以换成someday。
In 2002 will be implemented in three 10 X college entrance examination College entrance examination system in the reform of English teaching The key lies in establishing the class-based teaching system (1) listening and Against the status quo of poor listening and speaking ability of students to open every Monday of English listening and speaking Use the latest teaching listening "to the future"， "traveled the United States，" "expect English，" and other tapes， video tapes and newspapers， using advanced listening equipment in the classroom teaching through listening， speaking， dialogue， performances， lectures and other lively， interesting students heard about the form of training to improve the communication skills of students， training students in the level of oral expression， reversing the pre-existing "dumb-style" English teaching status (2) the addition of extensive reading classes， the establishment of Foreign Language Reading R Although the new textbooks to read the current increased， but far from what is In order to expand the scope of the students exposure to English， optional printing a variety of genres， subjects suitable for students to read the According to the requirements of content and reading test， teachers will be articles to classify each article in the post-coupled with an appropriate amount of reading comprehension In order to broaden the teaching of English extension， so that extensive reading in English from the curricular and extra-curricular extension to the establishment of foreign language reading acquisition have been published in a variety of domestic suitable for high school students to read English books， will be in English Extensive Reading from the classroom extended to Yuelan Shi to further stimulate students interest in reading and Subscribe for students in English newspapers and magazines， the establishment of English specialty health system， at any time to give them an open reading rooms and study Teaching through extensive reading， students can not only consolidate the textbooks and the basics， but also can improve the self-learning ability to develop intelligence， reading to be (3) The creation of writing Poor writing skills for students in English and Chinese-style English sentences in the written expression of uncommon situation， the school can fully use my existing computer software， according to the new textbooks written request， step by step training on the students "English written expression and training"， will be Practical， descriptive text， description text and carry out the purpose of discussion， sub-level guidance Writing Course opened for the entrance examination is not merely to prepare for the written expression， but also enable students to learn a variety of English style of writing methods and techniques to meet the future requirements of the community of foreign language (4) The implementation of the different levels of English teaching， the successful introduction of English classes and increase Students according to their actual English proficiency， the free selection of the successful lessons to enhance our School teachers to take a The basis of less successful lessons where students can make up for deficiencies in knowledge and a good grasp of double-base implementation， to develop their own non-intellectual factors， promote the improvement of performance and enjoy the joy of The basis of good students can participate in improving the high level of English classes comprehensive training to promote their own standard of English to the "high， precision and advanced the" development and outline the task ahead of schedule to prepare for the 2002年全国将实施3十X高考制度。高考制度在改革，英语教学改革势在必行。 关键在于建立各课型教学体系 （1）听说课。针对学生听说能力差的现状，开设每周一节次的英语听说课。选用最新听力教材“走向未来”，“走遍美国”，“希望英语”等录音带，录像带及报纸，利用先进的听音设备，在课堂教学中通过听，说，对话，表演，演讲等各种生动，有趣的形式对学生进行听说训练，提高学生的交际能力，训练学生的口语表达水平，扭转以前存在的“哑巴式”英语教学的现状。 （2）增设泛读课，建立外文阅览室。现行新教材尽管阅读量增加，但远远不能满足需要。为了扩大学生对英语的接触范围，可选印各种体裁，题材适于学生阅读的文章。根据内容和阅读测试的要求，教师将文章进行分类，在每篇文章后配以适量的阅读理解题。为了拓宽英语课堂教学的外延，使英语泛读由课内延伸到课外，建立外文阅览室，购置国内现已出版发行的各种适合中学生阅读的英语读物，将英语泛读由教室扩展到阅览室，进一步激发学生的阅读兴趣和主动性。为学生订阅英文报刊和杂志，建立英语特长生制度，随时给他们开放阅览室和自修室。通过泛读课教学，学生不仅能巩固课本中出现的基础知识，而且能提高自学能力，开发智力，从阅读中得到乐趣。 （3）开设写作课。针对学生英文写作能力差，中国式英语句子在书面表达屡见不鲜的状况，可充分利用我校现有的电脑软件，根据新教材写作要求，循序渐进地对学生进行写作训练。 “英语书面表达与训练”，将应用文，描写文，说明文和论述进行有目的，分层次的指导训练。开设写作课不仅仅是单纯为高考的书面表达做准备，也是让学生学会各种英语文体的写作方法与技巧，适应未来社会对外语人才的要求。 （4）实施英语分层次教学，开设英语成功课与提高课。学生可以根据自己的实际英语水平，自由挑选上成功课还是提高课。教师采取挂牌上课。基础较差的学生可以在成功课里弥补知识的缺陷，抓好双基落实，开发自己的非智力因素，促进成绩的提高，享受成功的喜悦。基础较好的学生可以参加提高班的较高水平的英语综合训练，促使自己的英语水平向“高，精，尖”发展，提前完成大纲任务并为竞赛作好准备。
